Friday 19 February 2016

Advertising and e book ploys


I am an author, and regardless of the twelve e books published on Amazon. I will not say I am established, and I am not an independent publisher for very good reasons. One reason is my IT skills are not the greatest in the world and I have no idea how to format a story into the e book formula. There are also things like grammar to check that although being English I fall short of being perfect by 30% or more.


I have a publisher that takes her cut out of my royalties that has a very hard working editor. He will check my story through and make it more presentable to the general public. Over the years through his patience with answering my questions with a real critique my grammar has improved another 10%. I will not go into why my grammar is so bad because it is well documented in my story, Dunce at the Back of the Class.


I read stories of a different genre to the one I write, so as not to fall into any acts of plagiarism. I am happy the way things are going, and even with the meagre royalties I collect every year. I am happy that the publisher and the editor take a percent of my royalties, because without them my stories would still be in a folder on a flash drive. I cannot see in the future where I will drop everything and go on a world cruise spending my royalties. I have seen the world and I have no need for travel.


I write because I enjoy writing stories that I hope that others read and enjoy them, and the money aspect is just icing on the cake. I like others reading my stories and hear their appreciation or their concerns. Critique is something I can live with, and I never get upset with a bad review because one bad review is just .01 percent of the world audience. I read them and check to see if what they criticise could be done better, and always consider the usefulness of the criticism.


The thing that is getting on my nerves just lately is the writers that are name droppers when trying to sell their stories. I am afraid I checked a few out because of my disbelief, and I believe a certain amount to be stretching the truth just a tad. I belong to a book club that gives me e books at a reduced fee or sometimes free. Two of the main selling lines are 500 five star reviews on Amazon. *Really?*



I had to check this out just to satisfy my own curiosity, and knock me down with a feather. There they all were all 500 reviews, and if you think that is remarkable then I will tell you now that this person has only written one book by the Amazon information, and it has only been published three months. How remarkable is that?

Now this is the part I really don’t understand or maybe I do. This story was advertised on Amazon for I think $4 whatever, but this guy is now giving it away for a week for free. I have to ask why? If this story is so successful over a three month period, surely the writer is on a roll. I think the real reason is he needs to collect some real reviews to mix in with the 500 B/S ones. However, I might be just cynical. Then again I could be green with envy—no let’s not go there because that day will never arrive.




There is one other sales ploy that always brings a smile to my face, and the words are, “Bestselling author to the NYT,” Really? How many bestselling authors do the NYT have in 28 days and who is doing all this reading instead of writing about real news? These questions and other useless bits of information will be talked about in some of my other blogs.

My stories sell because of my royalties, but I think I have only had about six reviews spread out over all the stories. I read one review and I have read it several times and wonder each time if the review was even meant for that story. If it was, I believe it was for a different story from the one I thought I had written. Still at least he put his finger on the keyboard to show his appreciation for what he thought he had been reading.


It is a hard being in the world of an author, and I am glad that I keep my feet firmly on the ground. I do not write for the money, but having said that, what comes my way I am thankful for. I never care if my royalties only pays for a few days holiday in the prettiest country in the world, Scotland, as long as they pay for something. To all of you struggling authors keep writing the stories, and if fate smiles your way you will be recognised. Never throw down the pen in despondent capitulation to the millions of other writers feeling the same as you.
http://www.amazon.co.uk/Vengeance-Mine-Ian-Johnstone-ebook/dp/B017WJCJ1E/ref=sr_1_24?ie=UTF8&qid=1455446505&sr=8-24&keywords=ian+johnstone

I checked one more to make sure that I was not talking nonsense, and found an amazing fact. On one of these adverts. ***** story by ******** had 500 five star reviews on amazon. This person had ten stories on Amazon but I only counted three hundred reviews shared between the ten stories. the person could not count and the advert was a lie at worst and fraudulent at best. I do not like being cheated whether the story is free or paid for, because at the end of the day it is my time being wasted reading second rate stories.


Be Well Ian.


Sunday 14 February 2016

Battle for the Realms

Battle for the realms.



CHAPTER ONE

Warrior had been sent to the world known as Leif to speak with the gods.  He appeared outside a large palace and the gates opened to allow him in.  The heralds took him to the main hall were all the gods were seated, Warrior bowed as he came to a halt in front of the Chief God or rather Goddess.

  “My Lady Victoria, the Creators have sent me on your request to alleviate a problem here.  As for all the gods in the universe, my sword arm is an extension of your own arm, and your enemies are my enemies.”

“Warrior, I thank you for coming.  We, the gods, have a serious problem on the surface of this world.  Perhaps it is the result of our own mismanagement of the situation, but I feel that much of what has happened has been beyond our control.

“There are two land masses on the surface,” she continued, and she pointed to the hologram floating in the centre of the hall.  “The large one on the left is called Tarn, and the one on the right is Metros.  Their Lords and Kings have been changing throughout the years, and there have been the wars and upheavals that we were told to expect when we were sent here by the Creators.

“A short time ago, the colours on the hologram changed to red overnight.  We have no idea why this happened.  As soon as we informed the Creators, they told us that for our own safety we should not go to the surface.  We have had a lot of warriors sent to the big hall for the war at the End of the World, and they all say the same thing.  There are two Kings down there, calling themselves Lord Cyber and Lord Flax, and the stories of atrocities they have committed are horrendous.  We need to know, Warrior, what really is going on down on the surface.  There is talk of evil magic and dead souls walking and fighting with these Lords’ armies.  Monsters and the like are running free, with nothing to stop them killing and maiming the population.  The only explanation we gods can put on it is that the world is not developing as it should because of these two warring Lords.  In our estimation, this world is about a thousand years behind time.  I know what you are thinking, but we informed the Creators of this over a thousand years ago.  Their answer was to keep persevering, and that it would get better and its development would start to move faster, but they have given us no idea of the timescale and we cannot wait forever doing nothing.”

“I will go to the surface, my Lady, and see what this is all about.  With your permission, my Lady,” and Warrior bowed and faded.

He appeared on the surface, which he knew to be Tarn.  Before him there was a battle taking place, with four thousand soldiers fighting what seemed an endless supply of the opposing army.  There was no way the soldiers could win, and when fireballs began to rain down on them from out of nowhere they took the only reasonable action in the circumstances.  A horn sounded, and both mounted and foot soldiers ran back towards the hills.  Then Warrior heard the words he dreaded to hear, spoken by a man on the hill.  The voice was loud, possibly too loud for a mortal.

“Forward!  We must find the Stepping Stones to the Gods.”

Warrior faded from the scene, and reappeared on Metros, although he was invisible to everyone around him.  He entered a large tent where one man, clearly in charge, was addressing the generals.  The man looked up, his eyes narrowed as if he were looking for someone, but he could not see Warrior.

The man looked back at the generals, and shouted at them, “You are letting me down.  You should have found the Stepping Stones by now.  It is my right by conquest to get to them first, but your incompetence may lead to another g… another Lord finding them before me.  Now get back out there and scour the churches and sacred houses.  I want the key.”

Warrior had heard enough.  He returned to the hall of the gods.

“My Lady, the situation is worse than I ever thought it could be.  I will have to go and report to the Creators.”

He saw the goddess’s head drop in resignation.  “My Lady, if it is any consolation, it is not your fault.  What is happening on the surface of this world is outside the control of the gods and far beyond anything you or any of the gods could have anticipated.  Have faith in the power of the Creators and their warriors.  With your permission, I must go and give my report, my Lady.”

“Yes, go, Warrior, and the gods hope that you have better news on your return.  You will return, Warrior?”

“Yes, my Lady.”

* * * * *

Warrior met the Creators in the Mists of Time and informed them of all he had seen and heard.

“This is gross incompetence on the part of the gods, Warrior, and they and the world should be punished.”

“My Lords, with respect, they informed the Creators of these problems over a thousand years ago.  In fact, it may have been going on since before the Council of Gods for this world was appointed.  These two gods on the surface of this world, for there is no doubt in my mind that they are gods, have used various guises over the centuries when they proclaimed themselves Lords or Kings.  All the time, they have been building up their powers and their strength.

“The Council of Gods here has only been doing what the Creators told them to do, and that was to persevere with the problem.  They had no idea what was really going on, and they certainly could not have anticipated the exceptionally high level of evil that we can now sense.  They only had some clue as to the severity of the problem when the hologram changed from green to red a short time ago, and that was when I was called.  Over half the people of this world are good and God-fearing, and that on its own is more than enough to mean that they deserve help.  However, the evil of those two gods is far too powerful for me to handle alone.  I watched a rain of fireballs directed at an opposing force, and I believe this is only a small measure of the power that must be dealt with here.  There are good people trying their best to fight, and yet they have little knowledge of what they are up against.”

“We will see to things.  You may go to Asgard and rest, Warrior.  We will seek the advice of the other creators.”

* * * * *

Marina and Brandon appeared on Leif, with the usual three Valkron accompanying them.  There was a village not far away, and they headed towards it, but just outside of the perimeter Brandon stopped and looked around them.

“There is something not right about this village, Marina.  I am unsure what it is, but I have a strong feeling that there is danger here.”

“Yes I sense this danger too, Brandon.  I sense that it is now on the move and heading towards us.”

At that moment, twenty mounted soldiers rode out of the village towards them at a trot.  On seeing the small group, five of the mounted soldiers stopped.  Each had a young girl lying across the front of his saddle, and all the girls were screaming for the riders to let them go.

“Well, look at this: a bonus four more to take to our camp.  Four women look far too many for you, boy.  I think you ought to pass them to us to look after for you.”

“No, I don’t think so,” replied Brandon.  “I think it is you and your army that has far too many women for you to handle.  I believe that if you release them and put them down, Marina will be lenient with your punishment.”

“You are obviously having trouble with your eyesight, boy.  There are twenty of us and five of you.  Now, what do you say to that?”

“Look, it’s far too late to tell me that.  If you wanted to go and get reinforcements, you should have thought of it before you challenged us.  Now, do as I say before I get upset.  Put the girls down, and you’ll live.”

“We are going to set the girls down and then we will kill you, boy.  We’ll have your horses too.”

Brandon watched the soldiers put the girls on the ground telling them that they had better not move.  “You eight,” the leader said to eight of the riders on his left, “Go and rip that woman off her horse.  I want her two swords.”

“Pull back, Brandon.  The man wants my swords,” said Marina.

Brandon smiled as he pulled his horse back well behind Marina.

“Send your men over here, big mouth, and I send them back without their heads.”

“Get her now.”  The eight charged at Marina, and as they came close her swords were out and back in before the leader had any idea what was happening.  The heads of the soldiers were rolling about on the ground.

“Well, big mouth?  Are you going to come and claim your prize?”

“Lord Flax is not going to like what you have done,” the leader told Marina, showing no inclination of moving any closer to her.  “He will destroy you with his powerful magic.  Get the girls and we will go back to the castle.”

“If you wish to remain alive you will leave the girls where they are,” Marina retorted.  “Now toddle off to Lord Flax, and tell him that Marina is here to kick his miserable body off the surface of Leif.  You can also tell him that his days of plundering the countryside are over.  My army will be here shortly, and then I will show him what magic is all about.”

“If I had time I would cut you down, witch.  We burn witches unless they are fighting for Lord Flax.”

“Drusilla,” Marina said to one of the Valkron.  “Do something with that cape the big mouth is wearing.  It will get caught on something if it goes on blowing about like that.”

Drusilla pointed her finger, and the cape caught fire.

They watched as the soldier screamed and ripped it off his back.  “I will make you pay tenfold for that, witch.”  He rode away with the other soldiers at a blinding pace.

The girls were bowing, and one said, “Thank you, my Lady.”

“I am not your Lady.  I am Marina.  Your Lady is the Goddess Victoria.  It is she that you should be thanking, because it is on her request that I am here.  If this is your village, then I think you ought to go home as soon as possible.”

Marina watched the girls as they ran off, and once they were out of sight, she and the four others faded to reappear near the Palace of the Gods.  The gates opened, and they were taken to the Meeting Hall of the Gods.

A goddess was standing near a lectern.

“My Lady, I am Marina.”

Marina heard the whispers round the room.

“I have been sent here by the Creators to sort out this ugly mess.  First though, I would like to say that my god, the Goddess Omecihuatl, sends her greeting to the gods of Leif.”

“Thank you, Marina.  Your name carries a lot of weight, as does your god.  I welcome you to our world, but as you say, it is in a mess.  This must be Brandon, your General and second in command.  Your name precedes you in the Pages of Time.  Star, Drusilla and Topaz, I welcome you all on behalf of the gods in their entirety.”

“I have seen the chaos on the surface, my Lady.  I have shown my intent to Lord Flax, as he is called.”

“How do you mean, ‘as he is called’?  Who is he, Marina?”

“He is not a lord but a god.”

There was another murmur passing around the seat of the gods.

“I will tire him out before I imprison him,” Marina told them.  “He is an evil god who should not be on the surface but in the underworld.  I could feel his immense power as soon as I appeared on the surface of Leif.  Once he has been neutralised, I will do the same with Lord Cyber, because he too is an evil god.”

“Do you need an army, Marina?  There is one on the surface, but it is disorganised.  I am not sure how you will go about getting them to follow you, but I have been informed by the heralds that there are at least five thousand of them.  The only problem is that Lord Flax has ten times that amount of soldiers, and he can summon them by magic with no more than a word.”

“So, he uses Magic to transport his army.  The sort of army that I place in front of him will soon put him in the right frame of mind.  The soldier we ran into on the surface said something about going back to the castle.  Do you know where this castle is?”

“There are over twenty castles dotted all over the countryside.  Lord Flax has been building them for several years as he took more territory.  He uses the prisoners he captures to do the building, treating them no better than slaves.”

“Where does he keep the prisoners?  In the castles?”

“He built a prison that usually holds about three thousand of them.  It is not very well protected, but no one has the nerve to attack it so not many guards are needed to defend it.  It’s empty at the moment, because he is using the prisoners to build a new castle.”

“In that case, my Lady, the new building will be the place I free first, making the prisoners a large part of my army.”

“It is there that you will find the army that is loyal to me, Marina, but they are without a real commander.”

“With your permission, my Lady, I will speak with my Creator and then place my army on the surface.”

“Yes of course, Marina, and the blessings of the gods are with you.”

They all faded, and Marina and Brandon met Marina’s Creator in the mists of time.

“These two gods, Marina, cannot go on with what they doing now.  They are breaking all the universal laws and it has to stop.  They are making a mockery of everything good, and they cannot be allowed to go on seeking the key to the Realms.  Certainly they have a big task ahead of them if they persist in that direction.  After the problems we had with Earth, all the lower Stepping Stones on every world were destroyed.

“You have all the powers, and you may use whatever you need, but I very much doubt that you will have to go too far in that direction.  You fight magic with magic, and the way you do it makes you the most powerful in the universe.  I will never leave you wanting as you go about your task of cleaning up this mess, Marina.  My blessing and those of the Creators in their entirety go with you.”

* * * * *

Marina and the entire army of Valkron appeared on the surface, where the new partially built castle could be seen in the distance.  In the other direction was the army that remained loyal to the Council of Gods.

“We will go and see if the army is willing to make war with this Lord Flax.”

They rode in the direction of the army.  As they came closer, they could see that the lookouts had spotted them and the army was on the alert.  A detachment was sent towards them, but on seeing Marina’s force of Valkron, they rode back to the main army at speed, and there was sudden movement in the ranks of soldiers.  Archers fanned out in front of the army, and Marina could see that they were frightened but ready to do battle if necessary.  There was nothing she could do about the way they were reacting, because she understood their reasons.

“Deacon, we will need the barrier, but at no time do I want to look aggressive.  I need this army to trust me.”

Marina was within a hundred paces of the archers, and she continued riding slowly forward.  At fifty paces, she stopped.

“Who is in charge here?” she demanded, but this was met by silence.  “Now, don’t be silly.  I want to know who your leader is.”

A voice from within the crowd answered, “I am the leader, but for how long I have no idea.”  As he answered, he walked out in front of the archers.  “Who are you, and what do you want?”

“I am Marina, and I am here to free your world and give you your land back.”  There was a lot of muttering, and then the archers lowered their bows.

“You are the one the priests have been talking about.  They say you have a direct link to the gods.  You can see that we are in fear and disorganised.  We are all that is left of an army totalling thirty thousand.  Do not mistake my words, Marina, we might be in fear but we will still fight to the death.”

“Then I am in time, because I have every intention of leading this army to victory, as depleted as it is.  Who are you?”

“I am Bandore, and it was I that started the army and the fight back against Flax.  I call him only ‘Flax’ because he is no Lord of mine.”

Marina said, “I want a true count of your spear men, archers and riders.  I want them in ranks and each type of soldier in his own group.  Tomorrow we are going to war and the first thing to do is to take our captured soldiers back from their slavery.  We are going to destroy the new castle and all opposing forces in it.”

“Marina, we are five thousand men and no more.  By the time we get near the castle there will be three times that number waiting for us.”

“What did your priest say about me, Bandore?”

“He said you would amass armies that have never before been seen on Leif, and that you will fight fire with fire.”

“Then trust me to do just that.”

“What about the walking dead he pulls from the grave, Marina?  How are you going to fight them?”

“I will destroy them the same way as I would do if they were alive, but faster.  Now do as I ask, because we go to war at first light.”

* * * * *

The morning came and the army was now looking more like an army.  The Valkron had organised them, with Brandon placing a Valkron at the front of every fifty soldiers.

Marina and Brandon were at the front, and Bandore was just to her left and rear, in line with Brandon.

“Order your men forward, Bandore.  They are still your army to lead.  Brandon is my General, and you must do whatever he says without question.”

They had been marching a short while there was an apparition in front of them.  Marina halted the Army.

“Where do you think you are going, witch, with that paltry little army?  You are going the wrong way, woman.  You should be running the other way.  I am in no doubt that you will be doing just that when you see my army charging towards you.”

Marina made no answer.  She just looked ahead, and then she turned to Bandore, still ignoring Lord Flax.

“I believe that is the new castle belonging to that disgusting creep Flax.  Well, it won’t be long before he will have to get another one.”

“Don’t you ignore me, witch.  I am the most powerful man on this world.”

Marina still took no notice, as she nudged her horse forward through the apparition.

They were a thousand paces from the castle when they saw the army appear out of thin air.  The army behind Marina started to talk all at once as they came to a halt.  Brandon turned his horse to face them.

“Now listen to me and forget about the army ahead, because they are about to be destroyed.  Marina didn’t come all this way to see you defeated and die, so have a little bit of faith in Marina and the Goddess Victoria that sent her.”

The army was once again quiet, and Brandon turned and rode closer to Marina.  “That army, Marina, consists of fifteen thousand foot soldiers.  I see no mounted troops anywhere.  I have also noticed a drop in Lord Flax’s power as those soldiers arrived, but there is no mistaking that they are real.”

You are correct, Brandon, and I felt the same as you.  He is using a lot of energy transporting those soldiers across the country.  What do you see in the army?”

“There are a thousand archers, five thousand spearmen, and the rest are swordsmen only.  Only the spearmen have shields and they are not big enough to cover their bodies.”

“The battlefield is yours, Brandon.”

The apparition appeared once more, and Lord Flax shouted, “How dare you ignore me, witch?  I will enjoy burning you when we capture you in a short while.  I will see that it is a slow burn, just to hear you screaming in pain.”

Marina did not even look at the apparition.  She just looked ahead with her knowing smile.

“Look at my army, you foolish witch.  I am going to take pleasure in wiping your army off the surface of Leif.  Are you deaf, witch?  I am talking to you.  Surrender now, and I will let you all live as slaves.  Can you hear me?” he shouted once more, but Marina just ignored him.

“Then your fate is sealed,” and the apparition disappeared.

The army started to march forward.  They were ten deep, spread over a thousand paces.  The army behind Marina watched nervously, and at that moment Brandon thought ‘Roman Legion with a thousand archers’.  When they appeared in front of the army, there was a hubbub of conversation but now there was much less nervousness.

As soon as Lord Flax’ army saw the Roman Legion appear, it almost came to a halt and would have done just that if the officers had not pushed them forward.

Brandon shouted, “March forward two hundred paces and form checkerboard.”

The army behind Marina watched in awe as this took place.  When the Romans stopped in formation, Brandon gave more orders: “Archers prepare to shoot.  On my command, a full quiver of arrows.”

The army heading towards Marina was now moving forward much more slowly.  They had never been up against anything like this before.  At a hundred and fifty paces away, they stopped and it was then Brandon shouted, “Archers to the front, pilum protect the archers for seventy five paces and then archers fire.”

Several blocks ran forward, and as they came closer the opposing army fired their arrows.  It was too early, and the arrows fell to the ground.  The second wave of arrows was better, but the shield went up and only one percent was killed.  The Romans stopped, and the archers fired a full quiver before turning and running back before the last arrow had met its target.  The opposing army tried to do the same with their shields as the Romans had done, but they had had no practice in forming an effective interlocking defence with their shields, and over a third of them were killed.  Their screams were horrific, but Marina was unconcerned.  They had chosen to fight for the evil gods, and this was the consequence of their decision.

Finally, the opposing army reorganised and started to march forward again.

“Pilum forward,” Brandon shouted.  The first block of soldiers ran forward, meeting no effective opposition.  Each soldier threw his spear and then retreated, and then the second block ran out and did the same.  By the time they had all returned, there were only about three thousand of the opposing army left to do battle.

Brandon shouted, “Every other Cohort, charge into the attack.  Let no one live.”

The battle was quickly over, and the Romans returned to their formation with minimal losses.
“Forward, to the Castle,” commanded Brandon, and the entire army marched forward.  They saw the few guards that had been looking after the prisoners riding out as fast as they could, and when they got to the castle the prisoners were walking out.

Marina clicked her fingers and the Roman Legion disappeared, and the remainder of Marina’s army marched up to the castle.  She looked around at the dead from the opposing army and the few that her army had lost, and she clicked her fingers again.  The dead disappeared from the battlefield, leaving behind their weapons and only a few horses to show they had ever been there.

“Bandore, have some of the army collect the weapons and give them to the soldiers we’ve freed, and then get them food.  They look half starved.”

Brandon was still sitting on his horse, looking as if he was concentrating on something.  A few seconds later, he relaxed and dismounted.  He walked over to Marina and stood at her side.
“Is something wrong, Brandon?”

“I am not sure, Marina.  I keep getting a feeling that dead souls are here on the surface.”

“You are almost right, Brandon.  There are dead souls, but right now they are still in the underworld, being organised and prepared to be drawn out.  You are feeling this now and not in the battle because we are not in the Outer World but on the surface.  My Creator is pleased with the battle today.”

“Marina, in the final part of that battle, I told the Romans to let no one live.  Was I correct in doing so?”

“These soldiers we are fighting made their mind up a long time ago to fight for evil gods, and to do that they too had to be evil.  If it had been a wrong order, my Creator would have said so.  The heralds have informed the gods of what happened, but they might wish to ask questions.  I need rest, Brandon.  Would you offer my apologies to the gods and answer anything they ask.”

Marina then walked over to the castle wall and sat down on a cubed stone with her back to the wall.  Her eyes closed and she slept.

The Pits of Death


CHAPTER ONE

The horn was blown three times for the Amazon warriors to amass in the centre of the village. Each warrior was standing by their horse ready to mount and counter attack any invading army. A small command of Hun warriors were riding along the eastern side of the village firing arrows indiscriminately into the buildings. They travelled the whole length of the stone wall on the eastern side. Some of the arrows struck an accidental target killing the odd warrior but injuring many.

They had appeared from the only dead area that the watchtower could not see, and that was behind a small forest to the rear of the mountains in the south east. The Hun had found a pass through the Caucasus Mountains and was attacking the Amazons from the rear. Danilo had been the first to respond to the horn by running over to the young Hippolyte to shield her from danger. She was four years old, and Danilo could see the fear in her eyes as she stood outside the door of Hippolyta’s palace. There had been no time to take her in and out of danger before the arrows started to fall around them. He placed her near the tablet of the fallen heroes before he stood three steel shields in front of her. “Stay there and don’t move,” he said as he picked up a shield for his own protection, but not before an arrow struck him in his left arm.

Hippolyta had run out the door to see what had taken place before mounting her waiting horse to lead warriors out of the village in pursuit. The Amazon warriors on the walkways near the wall had fired back with their own arrows leaving several Hun lay on the ground either dead or wounded. As Hippolyta rode out the village some of the remaining Amazon warriors jumped over the wall to check the dead and dying. Those that were wounded were marched back into the village and thrown into the keep.

By the time Hippolyta returned, the village was quiet once more. Danilo was sitting next to the tablet with Hippolyte on his lap with the arrow still sticking in his upper arm. After dismounting, Hippolyta walked over and took hold of the young Hippolyte’s hand looking at Danilo. “Thank you, my wolf and hunter. You thought of my daughter before your own well being, and that will not go unrewarded.”

“I seek no reward, my Lady. I am your daughters protector as well as yours. Might I say something, my Lady?”

“Yes of course, Danilo.”

“I know that you have already realised it, but these attacks cannot go on unpunished. This Hun general called Edico has no idea of your worth, and he is thinking that you are weak because you are a woman. That is the third attack in less than ten days. I ask for you to let me find his camp so that you can turn his attacks into your attacks? I know this land like the back of my hand that will help me to travel by night.” He pushed his arm forward showing her the arrow sticking out.

“Edico has now made his battle personal.”

Hippolyta knew all that Danilo had told her was correct. The Hun was thinking that she and her army of Amazons was an easy target. “Thraso, fix my hunters wound and then we will talk of warring against the Hun once more.”

Hippolyta and her commanders walked over to the council fire that was always alight. It was around this fire where all the orders for the daily running of the village were made. Once there Phoebe put her knife tip in the red hot embers while Thraso turned his arm towards her. Thraso snapped the flight of the arrow off just above where it entered his arm, and the tip had gone right through to show. She then placed a thick leather gag in his mouth and told him to bite on it. When he nodded she pulled the arrow through and out. Phoebe had walked up and pressed the knife tip over the wound both sides to stop the flow of blood.

The pain was worse than the arrow striking him and he could feel the tears in his eyes. Thraso looked at his tear filled eyes and said, “That hurt me more doing that than it hurt you, Danilo.”

He took the gag from his mouth to get close to her face looking intently. “What are you staring at, Danilo?”

“If that was hurting you more than me, I was just wondering why I see no tears in your eyes.” The commanders and Hippolyta burst out laughing along with most of the warriors that had rode against the Hun.

A warrior walked over to take Hippolyte away from her mother before she and the commanders began to talk. “My hunter is correct because this Edico is beginning to be a thorn in our side. We have had peace with the Hun since the death of Bataar, and now Edico has ventured south. We have no idea how big his army is but I am going to find out.”

“There has been word from the traders, Hippolyta. They are saying that this Edico has been attacking and pillaging the villages. These attacks started ten days ago, but until this morning when one of the village elders arrived here we had no idea. The story from the village elder was that Edico has a big army to the north-east of the Mountains.”

“I can say for sure, Thraso. Edico will not be staying in my realm much longer to keep mounting his attacks. Danilo, I grant you your favour. You may go in the morning once you have rested your arm, and find his camp. Do you need a horse to cover the eastern side of my realm?”
“No, my Lady, a horse would only slow the wolf down.”

Hippolyta laughed, “You amuse me, Danilo.”

Scyleia then said, “We have three Hun captives, Hippolyta.”

“Are the wolf pits full?”

“Yes, they were filled in advance of this attack, Hippolyta.”

“Then bring them out and they will die for our dead.”

The three men were led out with one being no older than Danilo. There was no mistaking the fear in their eyes as they looked at this queen who was known for not showing mercy to Hun warriors. “You have reason to fear me,” she spoke harsh. “You are about to die for invading my realm and disturbing my peace. You and your foolish general think that you can come to my realm and attack me in my own village.”

“I have laws saying that all invaders must die, and that is you.” She pointed at each one in turn showing them her face of anger. “There is no time to build a fire outside the gates so I am afraid you will be thrown to the wolves. I am a merciful queen, and if I think that you have put up a good fight and kill the wolves. I will give you your freedom. If you die you will have in the back of your minds that Edico will be joining you in hell very soon”

Just as they were about to start Danilo asked, “Can I say something to you, my Lady. It is important to what you are about to do.”

“Yes come here and tell me.” Danilo walked over and spoke to her quietly. “What a good idea, I love torturing the Hun’s minds.”

She then looked at the three Hun and spoke as she pointed to the youngest Hun. “You are going to be spared the wolves until we capture you once more. You are going to take a message to Edico. Phoebe, walk him to the other side of the pit so that he can see his friends fight for their life.”

When it was done and he was looking down into the pit, and even though he was being spared his body was still trembling with fear. The wolves on seeing him were jumping up trying to get at him, and he pushed back at Phoebe and the other warrior a little. The sharp teeth of the wolves were shining as the sun struck them. There could also be seen the saliva hanging from the corner of their mouths. As their feet pressed against the walls of the pit, their sharp nails could be seen spread out. The Hun warrior knew that only the lucky would survive this type of death.

The first Hun was given a knife and pushed into the pit, and the wolves gave him no chance to touch the ground before they were on him. His scream got louder as he descended and within a short moment there was silence except for the tearing of flesh. It was the same at the second pit, and after the silence the young Hun was walked back to Hippolyta.

“You have been shown a short mercy and are the lucky one. It is late now, but in the morning you will be released. I want you to take a message to that pig Edico. You will tell him of what you have seen, and because he has now attacked me and my warriors I will destroy him. I will not rest until he is in one of my pits of death. You can tell him that I will throw him in the same pit that I hung Churnobog and Bataar. Throw him back in the keep, Phoebe. Give him food as I don’t want him dying before he gives the message to Edico and I have the chance of killing him.”

Phoebe led him back to the keep and closed the door. Then returning to the fire where Hippolyta and the commanders were sitting. It was Thraso that asked, “What is all that about messages, Hippolyta? Why are you letting this Hun go free to attack us once more?”

“My hunter asked me to do it. When we release the Hun tomorrow he will follow him back to Edico. We could have tortured him, but we would still be unsure if he told us the truth before we threw him to the wolves.”

Thraso laughed and said, “It looks like you have another hunter that thinks ahead, Hippolyta.”

“We have to find out how big his army is before we can do battle with him. Nor do we have any idea where he is at the moment. I don’t want to chase him all over my realm as I did with Bataar because it takes a lot of time. What is the strength of our army, Thraso?”

“We now have four-thousand in the village and another two-thousand patrolling the villages. Queen Andromache in the south has roughly the same. The army has grown over the last four years since we had the trouble with Bataar. Attila has expanded his army east a little, but thankfully he is attacking the Romans in the west and is somewhere north of Rome.”

There was a little more small talk that went on late into the evening. By the time Hippolyta stood up to go in the palace Danilo was near the fire asleep under a deer skin. She stepped over him after saying good night to the commanders.

The following morning Danilo built up the council fire before taking meat out of an oven on the edge that was his. The meat he killed for Hippolyta and the commanders was cooked on this same fire. It was around this fire where the commanders ate their meals and discussed the days working. It was as he was eating he watched Thraso walk up to the keep to open the door. The young Hun walked out and Thraso handed him his sword.

“You have a message to deliver,” she told him. As she spoke she was looking at Danilo who nodded. “Go now, and make sure you tell Edico all that Queen Hippolyta has told you.”

They watched him run north out of the village, but Danilo still stay seated eating his meat. “Are you not going to run after him, Danilo?”

“I will wait until he is out of our sight and then I will leave. I know from the land about us that he only has one way to travel. It is to the north until he gets to the edge of the mountain. I will catch him up before he gets there because I notice that he has been lazy riding horses.”

It was a long time before the lookout shouted down that he was now out of sight. Danilo put his axe in the sling on his back and placed a bow on his shoulder with a spear in his hand. He then ran the same way, but Thraso could see that he was running a lot faster than the Hun.

It was almost mid day before Hippolyta came out of her palace to walk over to the fire. “The Hun has gone and your hunter left a short time later.”

It was at that same time when the lookout shouted, “There is a legion of Romans coming from the south.”

Hippolyta jumped up at the same time as the commanders. “Sound the alarm and get the defences ready for attack.”

The horn was blown three times and the Amazon warriors were ready and mounted in no time. There where warriors with bows and spears at the ready all along the eastern wall. It was at the same time that the lookout shouted down, “Queen Andromache is with the Roman General, and she has a small amount of her army with her. Her army are still armed, Hippolyta.”

It was a little while longer before the legion stopped almost three hundred paces away, and a small group rode forward with Andromache. The group was let through the entrance to the village following Andromache. She led them over to the fire, and as she did her slave jumped off a horse behind her and took hold of the reins on her horse. She dismounted and the slave helped her to keep her balance. Once both of her feet were on the ground she told the slave, “Look after the horses.”
“Yes, my Lady,” and he ran off leading the horses.

“Hippolyta,” she pointed to the Roman officer, “This is a friend of mine from the old days. His name is Alexius and he has some important things to tell you.”

The officer dismounted and looked about at all the arrows pointing at him, “You have no reason to be in fear of me, as I am here to help you destroy a Hun army. I know that they have most likely attacked you, and more than once.”

“Tell the archers to rest, Thraso.”

While she went over and spoke to the army Hippolyta walked over to the fire. The commanders were already there, and the Roman officer with Andromache walked over. There were three junior officers standing behind him.

“Queen Hippolyta, I have known you were here for over thirty years.” He was smiling as he was talking. “We the Romans have allowed you to stay here unhindered because I know the history of your people. I was a young captain in charge of the Roman army escorting your mother and Queen Andromache to where you are now. It was me that gave your mother and Queen Andromache this land with the full knowledge of Rome, and we have no intention of taking it from you.”

“There is a Hun army to the north-east with a leader called Edico. He along with Attila has been a thorn in Emperor Arcadius’s side for a very long time. He is a very dangerous Hun that must be destroyed. His army consists of over five thousand warriors that are battle toughened. I would think that he is no fool or he would not have stayed alive for so long. I have been given the task of destroying him, and hold this side of the Black Sea against the Hun. However, unlike you I have no large amount of mounted soldiers that I can call on.”

“I think that you are able to draw six thousand mounted warriors if you were in need. The Emperor is offering you one-thousand gold coins to fight for Rome and destroy this mad Hun. As you see I have a legion of soldiers with me and they are with me for a reason other than fighting you. I want you to call your army together and destroy Edico.” The officer took a pouch off of one of the younger officers and gave it to Hippolyta. “That is two-hundred gold coins in that pouch. I will give you four more if you agree to fight for Rome.”

The officer stopped talking while looking like he was thinking. After a short while he said, “There is another army to the north west. At the moment they are not concerned with this area, but it is that army that the Romans fear and so too should you. There is over ten thousand in their army and they are still deciding which way to go. Attila is moving west to warmer climates, and the Emperor is hoping this large army will follow their leader. If there is no Edico and no army, then there is no reason to come south east.”

Hippolyta looked at the officer and said, “If we take all of the warriors from both realms, there would be no one left to protect the villages or the realms.”

“That is correct and that is why I have a legion with me. If you allow my legion to enter your village we will protect it from the Hun? You will then only have to leave a small army to look after your slaves and property. My soldiers will be sleeping in shelters that will be brought here later today. There is the same amount of soldiers in Queen Andromache’s village that is almost obsolete and empty now. On completion of the task that Rome asks, there will be a further one thousand gold coins. If you will allow me, Queen Hippolyta, then I will go back to my army and wait for you to talk with your commanders.”

“Yes, I think that my commanders and I have a lot to talk about General.”

“Please, call me Alexius?”

The Roman officers rode away and Hippolyta waited until he went out of the village. “Andromache, give me your views.”

“I don’t really think that we have a lot of choice, Hippolyta. The last thing we want is another ten-thousand Hun to fight. I think this Edico is going to be a battle to remember for a long time. There is a legion of soldiers sitting outside my village, and I have sent word out to the outskirts of the realm for my warriors. We have never been in fear of the Romans as they knew we were fighting the Hun. All the time we were holding the Hun at bay they had a boundary they never needed to look after.”
“As soon as Echephyle arrives with my army she will talk with you to make plans for this war.”

“Are you not leading your army, Andromache?”

“No, Hippolyta, I am too old for all that riding. I will stay here in your palace and entertain Alexius, as we have a lot to talk about. It has been twenty-five years since he and I spent some time together.”

While she was talking Hippolyta could see the knowing smile on the face of Andromache. Hippolyta burst out laughing, “Echephyle is twenty-five, Andromache.

Andromache laughed before she replied, “Yes, so she is,” and laughed out loud once more.

“Thraso, as my second in command you had better ride over and tell the Roman officer to fetch his army to just outside the entrance, and then we will talk again.”

It was a long age before Hippolyta was sitting near the fire once more with the Roman officer. “It is in our interest to do as you ask and remove Edico from my realm. While your army is here they are not to go inside the dwellings, as they are out of your boundaries.”

“Queen Andromache will be staying here in charge of the village while I am away. It is obvious that there will be some contact with our armies, but my warriors are not whores. They will be on guard along with your men on the walls, and they are there for a reason.”

“There is enough room just inside the gates for your army to camp, staying out of our way. There will be a large amount of my army here at all times unless Edico gets reinforcements. I have no intention of committing all of my army until I think there is a reasonable chance of a successful encounter. There will be groups of warriors going out at intervals trying to destroy small sections of Edico’s army.”

“The Centurions will be keeping the Roman army under control, my Lady. They will also be very busy during the day building up your defences, because this Edico is powerful enough to attack the village in force. The amount of men I said were in his army is only an estimate. Queen Andromache’s village is in a better position than this one and the Soldiers will remain camped outside. Their Legatus Legionis is Basilus, and he will be keeping the two armies apart while helping to protect the village.”

“Why are you so concerned with this Hun, they have never moved south to where you are?”

“Attila is moving west, and he has left this powerful leader to look after the east. We the Romans think that Edico is ambitious and impatient. If anything happens to Attila he and one other of Attila’s generals would be in the correct place to take over. If Edico pulled in all of his army that are spread about Attila’s empire he would have over thirty-thousand. Queen Andromache knows that we have a garrison fortress in Lazica, it is very low on soldiers, but we wish to keep it there. We also have a garrison fort in Theodosia that because of its size would be soon overwhelmed by the force of the Hun.”

Hippolyta looked up to say, “One thing that you must remember. How we send the guilty Hun to their God is of no concern of yours. Our ways are hard but it is justice for the attacking and pillaging of my villages along with the killing of my subjects.”

“The Roman army will not interfere with your daily running of the village and realm. There is also a cohort of mounted Romans that might be of help to go with your local patrols. They should also be arriving at the same time as Queen Echephyle, as I believe they are travelling together.”

“Then I must send riders out to collect my army from the boundaries. It will take a few days before we can move, as I am waiting for my hunter to get back with the whereabouts of Edico and his army. He will also have news of the real strength of Edico’s army.”

“See to sending riders out, Thraso, we still have time while we wait for Echephyle to get here with her army.”

While the meeting had been taking place, the Roman legion had come through the gates.  They had left the entrance clear for the patrols to go in and out. There was a large section walking the inside of the perimeter placing a Roman soldier every ten paces on the wall. They all had a pilum [spear] along with their personal shield, and short sword hanging at their side. The carts with their tents and equipment were being unloaded and the empty carts were going out the gate once more.

Alexius could see where Hippolyta was looking and said, “You will not be getting any attacks from the south or east any more. The trail the Hun was using to come out of the mountain has been closed by a giant landslide on the southern end. All attacks by the Hun now will come from the north. You have the natural defence of the sea to the west so with your permission my men will strengthen your defences to the north. It is to your advantage as Edico will send armies to test your defence.”

The Amazons called home the village, but it was a lot more than that. It had an arena where they put on shows of fighting skill. There was a grazing area for their horses, with enough fodder and hay to last through the winter months. The peasants and villagers brought them the hay in payment for the Amazons patrolling their villages.

The area was some twenty hectares with a ten foot stone wall going all the way around. On the walkway behind the wall Amazon warriors walked the length, each having forty paces to walk back and forth. They had a bow for firing at attacking forces and a sword if the battle got personal. There were cashes of arrows and spear all along walkway resting against the wall.

Hippolyta saw men digging a hole in the ground either side of the entrance and asked, “What are they doing?”

“We are going to put heavy gates at the entrance. At the moment the Hun could walk in as if invited. When I take my army back to Lazica they and your defences will remain.”

It wasn’t until Alexius pointed these things out that Hippolyta realised just how weak her defences were. She had seen what the Romans had built in Lazica in a short amount of time, and it was impressive. She had not ventured into the town, but she had looked at it from a distance.

It was as she was still looking out the gate when the lookout shouted, “Scyleia with her army riding in from the south.” Hippolyta and Alexius watched as the army rode along the eastern wall slowly then a short moment later ride through the entrance. She stopped by Hippolyta as her army carried on to the centre of the village. “I have with me six hundred warriors, Hippolyta. We would have been here sooner but we were chasing fifty Hun away from a village. They will never attack and pillage our villages again.”

She then looked at the Roman officer, “I see that you have been making new friends, Hippolyta. He is a friend isn’t he?”


“Yes, Scyleia, we are going to war against the Hun once more. This time we are getting help from the Roman Emperor himself. This is Alexius, and he is in charge of this legion.” Alexius walked down the hill towards the army in the north of the village at the same time Hippolyta walked into her palace.